Monday, October 22, 2007

Term 4 goals

My first school goal is to find more information on the internet for inquiry this term.
I can achieve this by going on the computer at school in spare time.
My time frame would have to be the last week of the turm.

My second school goal is to think more about what I should write before I write it down.
I can achieve this by planning ahead and editing more.

My personal goal is to read more and more each day and night.
I can achieve this by drawing up a chart.
My time frame for this would have to be next week.

Tuesday, October 9, 2007

Speech Feedback Term 3 - Tornadoes

2.57 Great introduction. You took your time and looked at different areas in your audience. Your facts were given clearly and in a logical order. You talked about why tornadoes are called 'twisters' and included lots of facts about tornadoes, including what they are, what to do when they hit. Pausing between ideas gave the audience a chance to think about each one.        
 
Next Steps:
Scan the audience more. Congratulations on a really well constructed speech Joe, you are a great
speaker